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sdefiore · 23rd April 2004, 08:41 AM

Hi Kevin,

I would lose the music and give more information on the opportunity itself. The most successful sales sites go on for several pages and are very specific about the opportunity. The voice over is fine, but the music overpowers it.

Good luck,

Sue

23rd April 2004, 08:41 AM	#2
Username: sdefiore Rank: WF101 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: California Posts: 13 Points: 0.00	Hi Kevin, I would lose the music and give more information on the opportunity itself. The most successful sales sites go on for several pages and are very specific about the opportunity. The voice over is fine, but the music overpowers it. Good luck, Sue __________________ Interested in having your own successful, home based creative real estate investing business? Chuck and Sue have been helping folks start successful home based businesses for over 19 years, and we can help you too! To see how, visit http://www.homebusinesssolutions.com for the latest FREE tips and tricks, educational products and coaching in creative real estate investing and home based businesses.