New turn-key business site...opinions?

Kevin Thompson · 15th April 2004, 10:39 AM

Constructive feedback appreciated!

http://www.creatingwealth.ws/id/kevi...on/dancewithme

fill in the form with real or fake info (it is only seen by me) to get to the presentation portion of the site.

This is a new site (old one is in my signature) so I would really appreciate opinions please.

Thanks

Kevin

sdefiore · 23rd April 2004, 08:41 AM

Hi Kevin,

I would lose the music and give more information on the opportunity itself. The most successful sales sites go on for several pages and are very specific about the opportunity. The voice over is fine, but the music overpowers it.

Good luck,

Sue

Kevin Thompson · 24th April 2004, 01:05 AM

Thank Sue, I appreciate it!

Did you fill in the form to go to the presentation portion of the site? It has more info on the actual facts of the opportunity. I really feel that it sells itself, but it won't if people aren't getting to the presentation.

I also wasn't sure about the music, but you and I seem to be the only ones. Most feedback regarding the music is to keep it.

Thanks again Sue.

Kevin

sdefiore · 24th April 2004, 08:52 AM

Hi Kevin,

No I didn't. And I will be honest with you if a site I go to does not have the info I want up front I am not going to fill out a form just to find out what an opportunity is about.

Unfortunately, this is kind of the norm. No info, click and leave.

Have a great weekend,

Sue

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kevin Thompson

Thank Sue, I appreciate it!

Did you fill in the form to go to the presentation portion of the site? It has more info on the actual facts of the opportunity. I really feel that it sells itself, but it won't if people aren't getting to the presentation.

I also wasn't sure about the music, but you and I seem to be the only ones. Most feedback regarding the music is to keep it.

Thanks again Sue.

Kevin

**Mr. Tech** · 30th April 2004, 07:00 PM

That's the same with me.

Most people are looking for quick information and even though a form ins't that hard to fill out, people just couldn't be bothered...

Kevin Thompson · 1st May 2004, 01:50 AM

Thanks for the replies guys.

Admittedly, this site is a little more difficult to get the info then the first site. But..
It is designed to be a turn-key opportunity to get into a solid home-based business with large potential, complete with a website and auto-response system. A prospect can be completely set up within minutes. MLM is all about simple duplication....the info is there to access.

If somebody is not willing to sign a form or send a single e-mail to ask a question, then they are not the type of distributor that I am looking for. It's kind of like buying crap leads that haven't really opted in to see information. I want to spend my time with serious minded people who aren't afraid to do a little work and research to achieve success.

We have a great company with great products, a new marketing idea and huge income potential. We have a distributor that made $50,000 in his first 4 months. (Not the norm but I can prove it)
This program is perfect for the serious builder or passive investor.
I do not want to hassle or beg people to sign up, but rather filter through the masses to find the quality, serious leads.

I believe people will fill out a form and ask questions if they are true prospects.
Having said that, I still want to thank Sue for (almost) taking the time to evaluate the site and would still appreciate any comments on the site. (ease of navigation, content, auto messages etc etc)

Thanks again and feel free to contact me.

Kevin Thompson

italicus · 9th May 2004, 02:32 AM

I agree with Sue, you'd better give more facts and less hype. Even though you mean to give good services, people don't know that. Good luck on your site.

Italicus

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